both. I offered to give you detailed feedback (either through videoconf or some other means) and I don't mind redoing the same thing multiple times to try things out.
For the latter, I suggest adhering to a "strict" doc format where each screencap's big-letter title is just a title of the step, never instructions.
Thus:
Step title
Instructions
SCREENCAP
Conclusion about this step
Step title
Instructions
SCREENCAP
Conclusion about this step
For the former, divergences were small details but if it's really helpful to you, I can redo the tutorial while taking "sidenotes".
No, dont redo it now, i will rework it soon
Thats a great actionable idea, thanks for the suggestion i will implement it